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Оказалось что в английском вобще нету слова РОД...
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А как насчет слова
"Kin"?
По-моему оно всегда означало "Род".
Я когда прочитал, что Коля переводит общие песни, первая мысль была такая:
I trust in power of dream,
Eternity of love and human being.
I see eternity
Of Creation is coming.
From the sky to the earth
There are gardens of kins...
и т.д. Надо сходить за словарем, а то так туговато получается. Хотя песня удобна тем, что в русском оригинале нет рифмы.
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Я знаю кстати что некоторые уже переведены общие...
Вроде даже читал...
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Точно-точно.
Вот. Когда-то скопировал с Катиной флэшки:
Тут местами есть некоторые заусенцы.
Некоторые строчки мне откровенно не нравятся, я их пометил красным цветом: например,
Like first white untouched falling snow
Нетронутый падающий снег - это, конечно, редкость...
Может, кто придумает, как исправить?
Некоторые места поправил (их обозначил синим цветом).
Karavan
All meetings deeply in the hearts remain
All platforms, stages, stations, expectations
Your clear eyes - the greatest compensation
Soon we will meet with you again
Chorus.
My Karavan is dawning ray
It sounds ringing with the taut string
Under its steps the bondage falling
For lie and masks to go away
There is the beauty in this world
Lets sunshine go around the planet
We all were born to love and save it
And to be happy evermore
Various voices’ sounds and sky light
In songs are pouring through the continents
The love is right, the love is always right
It’s full of answers on all questions
The Day Is Coming
New day is coming
With the new joy is coming
It will be nice and kind
And the most happy day
Bright sun is shining
With the magic light shining
And its rays tell us silent:
“What a good, lovely day!”
Chorus.
That’s for you –
In grasses glittering dew
Rainbow arch smiles for you
With the eternal smile at sky
Dark night is coming
Night as usual is coming
Till the morning it's going
To be quiet for all
Bright stars are shining
With the magic light shining
And they wish us good wanderings
In our dreams at nightfall
Chorus.
That’s for you –
Moonlight at night sky view
My love song sounds for you
Wind plays his tender soft music.
Let’s shine!
Be kind, like morning,
Like clear and crystal rain drop.
Be wise, bright and shiny
You have everything in this world.
Be rich in your soul,
And spread your light all day long
In harmony live with the nature
Remember that you aren’t alone
Ch.
You have everything
For the happiness
Open out your soul
And you will possess
Beauty and true love
Light and warmth of soul
Everything’s for you
On the way you go
Be joyful and clear
Like first white untouched
falling snow
Forget all your doubts
All answers your heart only knows
It tells how to go
By new roads and destiny ways
All sufferings, troubles and partings
Let’s change into positive sense
Be lively, like children
Like beautiful tender spring dawn
Love, wait, meet new friends
Let’s dream and new world will be born
Where you’ll get all joys
And all the best songs of the Earth
Create your own lovely space there
Where you’ll become happy, of course
My home
As the dark night falls
And I go to sleep
Like a bird I fly
To my only dream.
I will build my home,
Plant a forest round.
Build a lovely nest,
For my family!
My home, my garden
Are the best of all world's treasures
My home, my garden
Are allways in my dreams
I will build then upon the earth
I will have them, come what may!
Every single day
Birds will sing their songs
And hard working bees
Will cheerfully buzz along...
And the sound of fluttering leaves
Will fill each new day
Every morning I will run
To meet the rising sun!
Shining with my joy
I will sing my song,
Shining with my smile
I will greet my friends.
I believe in tommorow
And I believe in dreams,
I believe that happiness
Will find its way to you.
о поездке Караване Мечты в Индию скорей всего будет в Москве, с индийскими плясками и песнями 
между прочим потомки ведруссов прямые 
да и немцы тоже братья и сестры наши ...
